if you looked closely enough, you could see her coming through the curtain of rain...
barring her yellow umbrella,the day presented a drab picture...the murky sky,the rain washed streets,a few plastics clogging the sewarage and two soggy paper boats sailing blissfully in the nearest pothole.
it had been raining since morning and looking at the sky,you could tell that it would go on all day.
she was at arm's length now.unkempt hair,trousers drawn uptill the knee,barefeet, she looked a bit worn out.the blue liner had smudged near the eyes but they exuded the same warmth as the last time we had met.
"fancy meeting on sucha rainsloshed day,huh?"she quipped.
"i see you havent any shoes on"i observed.
"ya,they are in the bag...fancied wetting my feet"
so 'fancy' was The Word now.last time we had met it had been 'flabbergasted'
it was fun hearing flabbergasted in every two seconds...
"...and i was so flabbergasted seeing that...and then that flabbergasted feling you know...you know what i mean,nah?"
and so it went the whole afternoon.
"sheesh man!"she was limping on one leg now..
"something bit me near my heel"she had already thrown a ruchus by then...
"relax.."i assured,"there arent any whales in here"
"how do u know?"
the liner had started trickling down her cheeks...it traced a blue outline all the way across her cheekbone...
it was raining hard now...
the yellow umbrella unfurled again...
"you said you would teach me how to make boats"
"you dont know how to make them?"
"what's the big deal?i'll learn today"i shrugged,a mild wave of indifference gaining on me..
she was cackling now..."you dunno how to make boats..fancy not being able to make boats..."she chanted in a sing song voice,enough to drive any sane individual up the wall.
an hour later, the rain had been pelting down hard against the tin roof..we were sitting legs dangling on a certain somebody's verandah...and a thousand paper boat lay strewn all over the floor...
and when the rain stopped,she waded through the water,barefeet,just as she had come, till the gathering darkness completely faded her away.
and the boats floated bithely in the potholes all night before another thunderstorm swept them away...
Saturday, June 23, 2007
paper boats...
posted by onnesha at 1:16 pm
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Its the rains.
They do something to you.
I think...:)
hmmmm.....figments of fantasy...
thats an awesome post...
loved it in its entirety...
and the innocence has been very nicely portrayed...
small things like this go on to make big memories in life...
nice!
'the empty handed rain from your street...
is drawing crazy patterns on your sheet!'
dont let her stop doing that!
Beautiful.and pristine,of course.
"we were sitting legs dangling on a certain somebody's verandah...and a thousand paper boat lay strewn all over the floor..."
how do u ever come up with sentences as lovely as this...!!!!!
I totally agree with Dreamy..its the rains....!!!!
:)
owesome.. asadharon likhecho.. ekta kagojer nouke tomar moner bhaber bhasan.. sottii khub bhalo hoyeche.
Arundhati Sengupta
I agree. The rains transform you. :)
THATS THE LOVLIEST THING ABOUT RAIN THAT I HAVE EVER COME ACCROSS IN MY ENTIRE LIFE MAN!!!
are u a lover or a poet? or a crazy cokctail of magic words??
keep it up gal!
could not wait for another reply of urs..
lolz!! what do u do dear lady?? u write so well..!!! you in ym?
fancy me givin a comment..... i see "sheesh" is aslo catching up....
and yesh....rain all mighty rain...
but i'd like to here what you say abt(corny as it is) "are u a lover or a poet? or a crazy cocktail of magic words??"
:P
if you say it wid an french accent.. its hilarious
hahaha
thats rite man..
i hope these comments had sound waves..
tsk tsk!!!
creativity seems to be increasing...good
the last time i made a paper boat, it ended up looking like a cross between a boat and a snake-like creature.
I suppose, we cud join a class together.
Although, i must warn you, i am not a favorite for teachers, im usually the kid they despise because he knows/talks too much.
ps: please post your replies on "rahul"
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